Adding Details to Writing
Understand how action verbs make writing more exciting
Practice adding descriptive action words to simple sentences
Learn to tell stories with more detail
“A gentle answer turns away wrath, but harsh words stir up anger.”
— Proverbs 15:1 (WEB)Shows how words can describe actions and feelings
Gather students in a circle. Explain that today we'll learn how to make our stories more exciting by using action words.
Action words help readers imagine what's happening in a story. Instead of 'went', we can use words like 'skipped', 'ran', or 'danced'.
Students will take a simple sentence and add exciting action words.
Simpler: Teacher helps student choose action words
Challenge: Create a short story using multiple action words
Share our new action-packed sentences with friends
Dear Jesus, thank you for giving us wonderful words to share stories.
Coming up: Tomorrow we'll learn about adding feeling words to our writing
“Let the words of my mouth and the meditation of my heart be acceptable in your sight, O Yahweh, my rock, and my redeemer.”
— Psalm 19:14 (WEB)🎯 Activity: Hand motions: point to mouth for 'words', touch heart for 'meditation'
Kindergarteners are learning to expand their writing beyond simple sentences
Difficulty thinking of descriptive action words
Enthusiasm about adding more details to writing