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Show, Don't Tell

Narrative Writing: Elaborated Events

Day 102of 180
Week 21of 36
25Minutes
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🎯 What You'll Learn

Learning Objectives

1

Understand how to describe actions and emotions with vivid language

2

Practice transforming 'telling' sentences into 'showing' sentences

3

Develop more descriptive writing skills

📖 Scripture Connection

Proverbs 16:24

“Pleasant words are as an honeycomb, sweet to the soul, and health to the bones.”

— Proverbs 16:24 (WEB)

Words can paint pictures and bring stories to life, just like descriptive writing

📦 Materials Needed

  • Colored pencils
  • Writing paper
  • Example sentences worksheet
  • Storybook with descriptive language
📚 Step-by-Step

Lesson Plan

1Opening (5 min)

Gather students and read a page from a descriptive storybook, asking them to listen for colorful language

💭 Review Question: What made the story's words feel like a picture in your mind?
2Teaching (8 min)

Demonstrate the difference between 'telling' and 'showing' sentences. Show how adding details makes writing more interesting.

📌 Key Talking Points:
  • Telling: 'Sarah was sad.'
  • Showing: 'Tears rolled down Sarah's cheeks as she hugged her teddy bear.'
  • Telling uses simple words, showing uses descriptive language
💬 Discussion Questions:
  • How do details help us understand a character's feelings?
  • Can you think of a time when someone's story made you feel like you were there?
3Activity: Sentence Transformation Game (8 min)
hands-on

Students work in pairs to transform 'telling' sentences into vivid 'showing' sentences

📝 Instructions:
  1. Receive worksheet with 'telling' sentences
  2. Use colored pencils to add descriptive words
  3. Share transformed sentences with partner
  4. Choose best sentence to share with class
🔄 Variations:

Simpler: Teacher provides word bank of descriptive words

Challenge: Add dialogue to 'showing' sentences

4Closing (4 min)

Recap the importance of using descriptive language in writing

📝 Review Questions:
  • What makes a sentence show instead of tell?
  • Why are descriptive words important?
🙏 Prayer:

Dear Jesus, thank you for giving us beautiful words to express our thoughts and feelings.

Coming up: Tomorrow we'll learn about adding dialogue to make stories come alive!

💎 Memory Verse

Proverbs 16:24

“Pleasant words are as an honeycomb, sweet to the soul, and health to the bones.”

— Proverbs 16:24 (WEB)

🎯 Activity: Whisper Chain: Pass the verse by whispering it softly from student to student

👨‍👩‍👧 For Parents

Teaching Notes

📚 Background:

Children are learning to add depth and emotion to their writing through descriptive language

💡 Teaching Tips:
  • Encourage creativity in describing feelings and actions
  • Help child understand the difference between stating facts and painting a picture
🤔 Common Struggles:

Children might find it challenging to move beyond simple statements

👀 Signs of Understanding:

Increasing use of adjectives and action words in writing

🚀 Want More?

Extension Activities

  • Create an illustrated story using 'showing' sentences
  • Play a descriptive charades game at home
  • Read books together and identify 'showing' language

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